Monday, September 21, 2009

.............................I Want To Be There, It Is Your Birthday... Comments

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With everything I do I want to put a smile on your face
Want to whisper thousands of sweet words in your ear
It is your birthday baby wanna be there to light up your day
Actually I want to light up your whole life
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Little Sunshine
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Iron Panda 23™ 05 March 2010

this is beautifully written.....a gift to remember^-^

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Olumide Ayodele 29 October 2009

simple but pregnant with such enviable feelings.a luvly piece.good job!

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Yasser Koor 20 October 2009

O little sunshine u have alot of passions and feeling to give. it is a amazing poem...it is make me wish this day to be my birthday ;) u know what? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? i like it and i wanna give it to my sister on her birhtday if u dont mind. i like too much... god bless u...or as u wrote, , i'm asking Allah for keeping u Safe for writing more great poems. ;)

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 23 September 2009

Lovely Words! Sincere Wishes! may your wishes come true.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 September 2009

What a sweet birthday wish, for some one you love so... Andi 10

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