Monday, February 6, 2012

I Want To Be There Comments

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I want to be there

When you feel alone and feel like crying,
No one is there to offer a shoulder,
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Jahan Zeb
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Poetheart Morgan 10 November 2012

your way to love is a friendly caress. beautiful and endearing! ! ! Beautiful! ! !

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Stevie Taite 18 October 2012

This shows what a caring soul you are. I hope they accept your loving offer, and that you can help them be happy

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Persian Khushi 05 October 2012

hmmm so much said abt yourself in this verse. loving, beautiful heart.

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Farah Ilyas 26 February 2012

physical existance is not meant, it is ur words ur emotion ur love ur care that have meaning...really a nice marvellous poem...: -)

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Diana Rosser 15 February 2012

Thank you for inviting me to read your poem, I am sorry that it has taken so long. I really enjoyed reading this thoughtful write.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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