I Want To Be Remembered… Comments

of course you will be remembered long after you have gone, Michael. Written words have great power...

The title drew me to this poem and I am glad I read it. Loved the analogy's you used in this poem. Good writing. Nice to have such a good spirit at your age. Sincerely, Connie Webb

For all our positive contributions to the society/world, we are bound to be remembered for long! That indeed is a great and noble life!

Oh how I love this poem! I think just one of the things that makes it so great is that everybody wants to be remembered and to make a difference while they are here...for however long they are here. The title makes you want to read it! You could not have picked a better theme or title for your poem and your imagery is Amazing Michael! Such A great well penned piece of art... 4 sure a ten out of 10...and it will be going into my favorite poems list. Happy writing......have a great day. =Shelley=

Michael, I don't know about the other things...but there's quite a good chance you will be remembered as the person you described in stanza #2! Beautifully written poem!

if i had something to type to leave for a comment i would. but all i can come up with is, amazing.