Tuesday, October 28, 2008

I Want To Be Immortal Comments

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I want to be immortal, near the swallowing light, embraced by Christ.
I want to be immortal, shaking off this cloak of skin and bone, entering
the unknown.
I want to be immortal, in this late autumn sun, where the gold chariot
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THEO RAY
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Deborah Cromer 19 August 2009

Your writing is full of nature's wonderous beauty. You include God and Angels to glorify thoughts. Nicely written. There is an intense form of lonliness that screams out and shares. It brings the reader closer. Your choice of words describe visions that are easy to see. Immortalizing your poetry is possible this way. Strong and deep, your feelings speak high of real emotion. DC

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