Sunday, December 6, 2015

I Want To Be Happy Comments

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I want to be happy
I want to be happy with all my hopes
Wake up from my dream with a smile
Grab my delicious breakfast and watch SpongeBob
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Dinda Khairani
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Souren Mondal 07 December 2015

For being someone as young as fifteen, your works shows immense potential Dinda.. You really show the life of the speaker and her lonliness in an amazing manner.. I had read two of your poems posted here and I hope to read more.. Thank you for sharing...

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Dinda Khairani 07 December 2015

Thank you so much, Souren. I will always try to do my best. Thanks for reading too!

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2015

You must be a happy man since you have so many things and the company of so many people to enjoy from morning till evening. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem. I quote: I want to be happy with all my hopes And sleep with the blanket of happiness ....and stuck in my pretty dream

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Dinda Khairani 07 December 2015

Yes, but sometimes we are too sad that makes us can't be grateful for what we have. Thanks for reading!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2015

Having so many hopes in lonely road of life and having vision of remaining happy is reality in pretty dream. Offering prayer to God is nice. This is very fantastically expressed poem shared here.10

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Dinda Khairani 07 December 2015

Thank you so much!

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