I Want To Be A Nobody Comments

Very nice & simple poem. It reminds me of a song by Five for Fighting called Superman. It's about celebrites and the fact that fame confines them. Your poem is as good as superman, so keep it up.

It's a well-put paradox, the desire to break free AND be a 'nobody'... the tensions of such paradoxes keep us writing for years!

Wonderful advice from Preeti Datar, I concur--good poem--Melvina

Sounds like 'teen talk' we teens always want to break free. I can relate, but not in my present day situation, yeah i did want to break free say a year back, but then, i didn't pay too much attention to 'what others' think or say. It's my life! You can be free, just get that blockage out! Preets