I Want To Be A Cloud Above You Comments

I love the wording in this and how you described everything so perfectly. It is a very humple and peaceful peice :)

Humble, heart touching poem. The imagery is so beautiful and balancing the delicate emotions. Nice poem.

Soothing, serene and peace, i like the feel you left on this write...it seems real and a really smile craving to whom read it.. :) The cloud and the wind such a team of great subject you have used here..and the last line is the biggest part in this poem..Like it, sweet poem to read.. :) _Unwritten Soul

Nice poem, very imaginative... Please take a glance at my poem(A dream)