Tuesday, February 5, 2008

I Want To Comments

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I want to flow as only the ocean can
I want to crash upon the open shore
I want to know what only the saltwater knows
I want to form waves for the eye to see
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Savannah Lewis
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The ocean is such a powerful symbol in poetry, you use it well.

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Savannah Lewis

Savannah Lewis

Carmichael, CA
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