Monday, July 23, 2012

I Want To Comments

Rating: 5.0

I want to sing a blissful tune
And embrace you under the glowing moon
I want to dance to the softest beat
And hold you close under satin sheets
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Jeffenise Robertson
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Heather Wilson 24 July 2012

A very easy flow to this interesting poem, a pleasure to read.

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Robin Bennett 23 July 2012

Nice rhyming and I enjoyed the heartfelt message in your poem. It was light, and delicate and after reading it I have a nice warm image. Thanks for a late night uplifting poem!

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Jeffenise Robertson

Jeffenise Robertson

Gardena, California
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