want to care for you as much as
you care for me
want to be true to you
more than you do
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wow..and I say again wow..very romantic piece..but i don't like your last line..LOL(joke)
Ahhhhhh… your “I want to” is so wow! I have almost envied her whom this poem is dedicated… but the last sentence caused me a little bit of discouragement… “damnit” thing… it carries away the sincerity. Anyways, just feel free to express your emotions, males have different ways in doing it anyway. :) I'll be reading here...
Readers fell from heights of ‘MORE~MORE~MORE’ finally Dammit! ! ! Wow! Gosh! ! Climaxed and culminated in pain Ms. Nivedita UK