Wednesday, September 17, 2008

I Want To Comments

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My breath stops but my heart still beats,
As i come to a realization of what just happened to me,
I love this man but he doesn't love me.
I let him into my mind and feed off my dreams
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doussou camara
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Taaj Bowers 24 September 2008

great poem Doussou! comment my poem 'daughterly love'

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Jason Taylor 17 September 2008

My breath stops but my heart still beats i really like this first line to a great poem well done.

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