What you see when you look:
The moon and the sun
along the same line
when fire and frost
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I have really missed your wonderful poems... this is a strong 10! ... sorry I've been out of touch, but I have been ill this past year... hope you are well and happy All my best CJ
A nice poetic imagination, Jette. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
I feel this poem in my marrow. I see others walking in this place, this time, hands sewn onto the other, a single cloak. How well I know that long. Beautiful, painful tug at the heart.
Sandra, my lovely lost friend, I have truly missed you. I have been ill these past years and just returned to poemhunter. I hope life is treating you well. I will stop by soon. All my best, CJ (cjkriegerlmtgmail.com)
This it really a lovely poem, kept me interested from the first line to the last...Beauttiful. Kudos to you my poet friend, all the best