Thursday, December 7, 2017

I Want Not - 02: The Altitude Comments

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I want not
That height of a mountain peak
High, great, yet alien-
that never bears a land or tree,
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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing 10+++ Alina

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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10+++++ Rani

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++ Sonali

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++ Lopa

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Lopamudra Kajolika 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 07 December 2017

A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 07 December 2017

and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++ Sabita

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 December 2017

Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

I want not That height of a mountain peak High, great, yet alien- We must love to share what we have Rather I would love to be a tree to fit to their needs and care and render before they ask for. A small tree is more useful than a peak of the mountain. Great sharing dear poet. Thanks. 10+++++++++

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Rini Shibu 07 December 2017

Wonderful poem, our achievements should be useful for others, rather heights which is seen by none

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