Thursday, December 7, 2017

I Want Not - 01: The Vastness Comments

Rating: 4.9

I want not
that greatness of an ocean
that never touches the land
that never bathes
...
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Alina Kaikeyi 09 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Alina for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Rani for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing Sonali

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks dear Sona for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sonali Parida 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Sonali for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 07 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10++++ Lopa

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Lopamudra for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 07 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Lopamudra, Thanks for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 07 December 2017

just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++++ Sanjukta

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Sanjukta for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sabita Sahoo 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing Sabita

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Sabita, Thanks for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Sabita Sahoo 07 December 2017

Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Sabita for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Neetu for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

I want to be just a pool to cater to the needs of my neighbours around people, plants or animals birds or ants, fishes or snakes Everyone there who does gather. A great poem with a message of social responsibility and sensibility. 10+++ for the sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Rimi dear. Thanks for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

I lovely poem....I want not that greatness of an ocean that never touches the land -I loved this beautiful poem..thank you for sharing..10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 February 2018

Thanks Sir for the lovely remarks and the great encouraging words. Sorry for the late response.

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