I Want My Space Comments
I am a great lover of nature
Of its myriad forms, its hues and shades
I have preserved,
In the folderof my cognitive files
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superscribe is 'new to me': write or print (an inscription) at the top of or on the outside of a document. etc. lines 4 & 5 my favorites. i 'know' bites more than i know bytes: a byte considered as a unit of memory size i hope you always find your space comfortable! bri (: to MyPoemList MySpace fills a tiny gap between sanity and insanity.
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This is a very beautiful poem. I fully endorse this feeling of freedom. Each individual must have his or her share of space to do what they like. otherwise one can feel the want of oxygen. So well thought of and so effectively worded. Truly, enjoyed reading this poem, Rajnish ji.
Thank you so much, Geeta ji, for appreciating this poem and posting a very positive review. Your words give credence to my point of view- 'Each individual must have his or her share of space to do what they like'. Thanks again.
a wonderful poem of how nature's wondrous beauty both inspires and gives us the strength to soldier on? .........well written Rajnish.
Thank you so much, Tom, for your kind words of appreciation about this poem.
I too need my own space and this poem confirms it. 'Emotional bytes'-an original image from computers; 'the timeline of my life'-another memorable image. It all adds up to a top-drawer free verse poem.
Thank you very much for your visit on these pages and for you kind words of appreciation about this poem (I Want My Space) . It means a lot.
Beautifully written.....amazingly created....a tremendous creation.....loved it :) .......so simple and so peace giving :)
Thank you, Abhilasha ji, for your wonderful comments which are no less than a value addition to this poem.
Battling for my own space, tiredness of soul is overt, liked ur english poems,
So, there in the secret chest of your heart, you have treasured quite a number of sun rise and sun sets to view at will and enjoy! Nature has such wonder and beauty to uplift human hearts! Lovely write!
It has been a wonderful feeling to receive an appreciation for this poem from you. Thanks.
Being great lover of nature is nice to express pleasant attitude. Having bytes of emotional heart and getting expressive surprise amaze mind definitely. Trees supply oxygen and we get freshness. In the charming valley of this pristine nature this is definitely a fantastic poem shared...10
Everyone has a desire to have his own space in this vast world. You have very nicely analysed the central theme of the poem. Thanks for appreciating the poem.
Awesome poem Rajnishji.........grace and elegance is eminent in your poem.100 on 10.
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7/19/2025 7:05:52 AM # 1.0.0
You have a true appreciation of nature's beauty, whose gifts are all free to those who know how to look. I like the metaphors, 'much needed oxygen', 'the timeline of my life'. Well put.