I Want Him (The One) Comments
I want him to save me
But how can he when he doesn't know I'm broken
I want him to know how I feel about him
But I just can't get the words out when I get the chance
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Yea! That's love, sure enough. A note about your writing. I've just read these two pieces. But, you write like you talk. People don't speak poetically under normal circumstances. They use the words they need and that's all. You really need to do more than that. That's what you have to do, in order to give it a poetic quality.
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9/14/2025 2:38:19 PM # 1.0.0
a very sincere piece. i liked it a lot