Friday, May 15, 2015

I Want A World Comments

Rating: 4.3

I want a world where,
The deaf can hear,
The blind can see,
The lame can walk,
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Ali Rahimi
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Linda 30 August 2019

I want the same world

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Ornithopetra Priamus 08 October 2017

This poem's been beautifully composed. The rhyme and rhythm, the choosing of the worlds... I believe this would make an inspiring lyrics to a song well written...Like those of the works of the late Michael Jackson.

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Catherine Switala 18 July 2016

This would be a perfect world. Love this poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2015

That is a world of peace, love, unity and joy! Without hatred and war. Nice piece of work.

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Ali Rahimi 17 May 2015

Thanks, Edward, for your input. Appreciated.

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