Sunday, September 13, 2020

I Want A Woman Comments

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I want a woman with pride,
Who will not walk in front of me
Or in the rear where she I couldn't see,
But, always at my side.
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Randy McClave
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Khairul Ahsan 15 September 2020

A straightforward desire neatly expressed. The poet, as though, has spoken on my behalf. 'That woman that the Bible has spoken about The woman who never gives shame or doubt, A woman who could never willingly bring pain or grief' - very important cosiderations to be remembered, and desired.

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Michael Walker 13 September 2020

You express a very common wish-to want a woman. I want one too, but never find anyone. This poem really makes me think about what the best qualities of a woman actually are. A romantic yet realist poem that succeeds on all levels.

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