Sunday, June 15, 2014

I Want A Way Out.. Comments

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I want a way out of my problems
and i cry everyday for a solution
i pray, i pray long,
wondering that someone would listen.
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Kirti Sharma
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Lorraine Colon 02 July 2014

It's difficult to care about others when you are suffering. You should not feel guilty. You are allowed to feel sorry for yourself and find a solution for your problems. It's not good to become completely self-absorbed, but a little attention paid to yourself is certainly allowed and expected. If you're unable to smile, you cannot help others to be happy. Nicely expressed poem.

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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014

Keep up your realization alive and that itself will take you a long way ahead.... very nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful poem Kirti. You have poured your heart here. Very true said, we often feels we have only problems and it is too big. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2014

a nice and heart shaking write.

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