Thursday, April 15, 2010

I Want Comments

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I want to kiss you all over your body
First starting at your neck and slowly going lower
I want to love you till the end of time
I want to hold you and move my hand slowly down
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AURORA BANNECKJ
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John Knight 23 April 2010

Hi AURORA - this is lovely. When we love someone we want to give ourselves to them completely. All the things you want are perfect - Total kisses - feeling - fondling - committal - happiness - total love - wanting you wanting me - AWESOME. Thanks for sharing - Love through Poetry - JOHN

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 22 April 2010

owkay! ! ! ! this is really deep... it gets to you when you read it and i think it's just one of those poems that creates a romantic environment and i'm sure some pple will try to take it with them a recite it to their lovers....so continue to bring the romance.... well penned short and sweet

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hmmm looks like your wants will be fulfilled as you love this lover a lot and the emotion like this that was deliver in this poem shows than the special someone will never leave you :) great poem

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