I Want Comments

The most sublime poem I have seen on PoemHunter. What a display of talent! Top score, dear poet

This is truly a Poem of Hope. You throw out a wide net and pull in many examples of what you hope for, any one of which will enrich your life. The language is direct and unshadowed by doubt or failure. You are simply equal to the task of achieving the poem and laying a foundation for further

Good writing. Keep it up.

live and let live. This is a simple but very truthful poem.

Yes, by knowing the full range of feelings, you become yourself. This passion for life reminds me LUST FOR LIFE, a biographical novel about Vincent Van Gogh. // In an uncanny way, your poem echoes one that I recently translated: THE WEIGHT OF A SPONGE. I invite you to read it.

A beautiful, meaningful and well-crafted poem. I enjoyed reading it, Anne, and thank you for sharing it.

warmth, emotions, love, human needs of l ove and care and concern. we all need I want you to be you I want me to be me keping your uniqueness i need u. very nice idea dear poetess. you are noble about human relationships.. tony

and how so nice piece of it in every word Yun.. I want vulnerabilities, to tell me my strengths I want insecurities, to lead me to secure faiths.. and all verses! like epics! Loved reading it to be myself to! ! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! 10+++! !

Very impressive poetry, wonderful style, I want words to comb my life through...I enjoyed this read very much.

Very nicely done. The symmetry, the antithetical contrasts, the rhythm. very enjoyable. :)

Great poem, nothing is more essential than being true to oneself.

Thought's flow round and round inside your mind. Could he but see the kind of girl I am. Then I would fly so high the sky would touch my wing's. Then I would close his eyes to what I've seen.. iip

A beautiful write. You voiced out the I want passionately. Enjoyed.

I LOVE THIS LINE MOSTLY But what i want the most, is far more than these I want you to be you I want me to be me BEAUTIFUL CANT SAY MORE WORDS

I am speechless I don't know what to say but i am going to do my best to, truly magnificent art my friend you want recollections, reflections, evaluations, that can purify the past I feel the same way I have done so many wrongs it makes my future hard to deal with but for you to write like this is going to ease up on the things in your past. Please don't ever stop writing.

I want possibilities, uncertainties, varieties, everything that can enrich the future I want recollections, reflections, evaluations, everything that can purify the past, . finally i want you to be yu and i to be myself. yes. we are all unique beings in our own way. these verses at the end are fine verses. thank you dear poetess.. tony

I like this. You without doubt deserve a 10 for this.