I Wanna Slip Back Comments

Lovely lines with a handful of hopes who are getting hindered. Sleep - you sleep my dear with lots of nice dreams..... loved it

such a sweet drop! ! loved it.

Thanks friends for leaving inspiring comments.

Beautiful poem Neela. Beautiful way you have compared nature to life. This poem left me wondered... Where I wanna slip back Is it to the lap of green earth, which is full of joy... or looking for joy thru the mirror of brook....Loved reading..

Wonderful! Beauty with great depth. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.