I wish to live without my heart,
i wish to tear it apart.
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Arfa your poem has taken my heart out of me. The way you have described your sentiments is really great and can wring any heart. Great pathos. Thanks for sharing.....
You have vividly captured the emotion, anguish and suffering felt by someone that is in deep sorrow. It is true that some people can feel great pain as opposed to others. To be perceptive at that level in itself is a gift and at times - a curse. A 10 from me.