Saturday, April 9, 2011

I Wanna Live Without My Heart. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish to live without my heart,

i wish to tear it apart.
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Arfa Iris
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Rishi Menon 14 May 2011

You have vividly captured the emotion, anguish and suffering felt by someone that is in deep sorrow. It is true that some people can feel great pain as opposed to others. To be perceptive at that level in itself is a gift and at times - a curse. A 10 from me.

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J'sN Young 10 April 2011

again I love your style and how you think

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 April 2011

Arfa your poem has taken my heart out of me. The way you have described your sentiments is really great and can wring any heart. Great pathos. Thanks for sharing.....

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hyderabad, A.P, India.
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