I Wanna Be There, Do All What I Can, Only For Her! ! Comments

A message of profound love, yearning, and joy. This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.

You taught me how to live, how to love, how to sacrifice. Till you came into my life, my world turned to a paradise. I wrote our story on the walls of my heart, to tell it to our children, to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven Waw I relly enjoy it when I'm reading It is well penned Bravo! !

I like the first two verses... how you asked a question. I have tried poems like this and it didn't work but yours did. Good Job.

'So I put the start of our story, and let my birds fly' That's my favorite line.

I completely adore this poem. Such beauty and feeling. I loved! ! !

I love the ryhme scheme and description!

Very well writen, Abdallah! Nice, good to see a new one from you, can't waite to read the next poem of yours :) ! ! ! ! ! !