Saturday, July 15, 2017

I Wanna Be Comments

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I wanna be your voice
I wanna be the delicate part of you
Pampered and laid down to sleep with a trumpet of lullaby
I wanna be that love figure sighted from among the moon
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 October 2017

I wanna be that love figure sighted from among the moon With a cute smile like that of the morning sunrise.. you are very much poetic here in this poem far more poetic than in other poems.......... write more pleaseeeeeeeeee... tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of romance. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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