I Wandered Lonely As A Clown (Daffodils) Comments

So mellifluous when read. Loved reading it. Please correct the misspelled word rythym to rhythm..

A beautifully crafted poem imbued with humor. Great rythym and rhyme. Five Stars! ! !

Thanks Dominic just a parody of a play on words. Nothing too pretentious or highbrow. Just good old fashioned daft fun. Not to take myself too desperately arty f a r t y serious. Thanks again and you get it.

Great parody of Wordsworth's famous poem Shaun! I particularly like your concluding line..really sums up the mood of the poem..humour punctuated by broken dreams, despair. It's definitely a flattened daffodils inspired five from me!