I wana gaze beyond the normal depths of your eyes,
To warp into a powerful trance; Mesmerize!
I wana be forever wrapped with your love
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Hey Kristin, k that was a beautiful poem, Great work.
Good girl Kristin, this is just what you wanna do and you must keep saying and doing it. It is just what I wanna do too. Thanks for saying it for me. Smiling at you, tingling again, but with a tear and a cheer! ! ! You are really kicking that illness into touch in my opinion, Tai
POETESS K., YOU SPUNKY TEMPTRESS OF LITERARY EXPELLINGS.YOU DO KNOW HOW TO WOOOO & WOW! YOU ALSO (IT APPEARS) HAVE THE FLAIR FOR SOME KICK-A** LYRICALS....GREAT PIECE MISS KRIS...YOU DO INDEED ROCK! '''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK(frankster)
It almost sounds like slam poetry (my favorite kind) . I think it's amazing. By the second or third stanza, I was totally caught up in it. Question: don't we ALL wanna...? Eni da Kid
This is the second time today I am left speechless Thankyou Tara for the other poem Love duncan X
K, this rocks! - Happiness in the little things in life, acceptance, true love, encapsulated in a fine write. t x