Sunday, May 14, 2006

I Walked Into A Dream Comments

Rating: 4.3

when she walked out of that door
i walked into a dream

we held us desperately
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Pete O'H
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Goldy Locks 14 May 2006

yes Pete, from start to finish - you captured the love you had for a stranger beautifully. the re iterance of the last couple to emphasize the first - works. sjg

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trisha evensen 14 May 2006

awesome love and peace, Trisha

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