I walked alone in the garden
In a reticent and pensive mood
Kinds of foliage grew around me
But plenty on my mind to brood.
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A promenade, observations, two contrasting images, and metaphorically representing two different states of mind - hope and hopelessness - a very well crafted poem Sumali.. Thank you for sharing..
Thank you Tiku! You are so generous with your comment...exactly what a new poet needs :)
Beautiful poetry.Rich in vocabulary it gives a soothing feeling.Liked it.
Thank you Souren for reading and commenting! (Just saw it) Love your comments! I opened your page to read your poems but got carried away reading your comments on others' poems: -) . keep 'em coming! !