I Walked Alone Comments

Hi Thomas, this is a soul poem with connection to family, spirituality and nature. I enjoyed the way you painted a picture of your journey using your senses and nature to draw the reader into your poem. I do have a suggestion, please be careful how you format your poems. I felt the second stanza was jerky and lacked continuity, I also suggest not starting every line with a capital letter, it is also not advisable to have one word lines. Read your poems aloud listening for rhythm and continuity problems. A very nice poem Namaste friend.

'I walk alone' with the peace of life. Nice work.

The Indian poet Rabindranath Tagore wrote a poem with a similar feeling. It became well known. Prime Minister Indira Gandhi used to quote it. If no one wants to join you on the journey, the adventure, the experience of struggle and quest, never mind, Walk Alone. Write on. The journey itself is the destination, perhaps. A. Madhavan

you have wonderfully presented your heartfelt thoughts in beautiful poetic language, thanks for sharing