Thursday, October 29, 2015

I Walked A Tamil Street Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked a Tamil street
Inebriate
On an October evening
When a cloud hesitated overhead
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Madathil Rajendran Nair
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 November 2015

A fine travelogue in the form of a poem

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 02 November 2015

Good sketch of the sweltering street, the throng of crowds, ladies their hair decked with flowers, rushing vehicles etc you covered almost all on this street. Sometimes even the offensive milieu is a part of life around us. I liked the street scene all along except the death part made me sad. But perhaps I know why you mentioned it.

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R.c. Nair 30 October 2015

'That is life When ignorance drives Why should men be any wise'- True words, a good read. R.C.Nair

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Valsa George 30 October 2015

This poem sounds a little different from your usual stuff....... I am sure it is all imaginary! Oh, how humans could be So somnambulist In so much physical discomfort! I wonder why then you sought a bed there amid all such noise and commotion! Did I miss your point? ?

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Kelly Kurt 29 October 2015

An engaging write, Madathil. I was swept up in the imagery and precise wording. Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

Walking in Tamil street is very wise, wonderful and, memorable as perceived with interesting imagery. A thoughtful poem shared definitely...10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair

Madathil Rajendran Nair

Bombay, India
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