Wednesday, June 25, 2014

I Walk, You Walk Comments

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I walk, you walk
Step by step
At ease we stroll
A new road taken
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Lyn Paul
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Sandra Feldman 20 August 2014

It is easy to take good advice when it is so beautifully and poetically written. Thanks for the wonderful advice, You and your poems, Always extra nice. Hey poets, run don't walk, When it's our friend Lyn, Who you hear talk.

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Neela Nath Das 19 August 2014

I walk, You walk Share the load At ease we stroll, There is no Highway To Hell..... But; ..There is always... a new road- - - A new hope, a new path.Every line is a gem.

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To walk is to live and to live is to walk. Powerful perspective my friend!

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

A life of sharing accepting each as he/ she is results in joyful companionship! Knowing well that the road ahead is not quite smooth, when they take step by step, there are no great disappointments. A great poem!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 July 2014

delight of life is in sharing, so well crafted this truth Lyn.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful flow of words from your pen... There is no Highway To Hell..... But; ..There is always... a new road Very true said, Lyn there is always a new road. Decision may be right or wrong for the new path taken. But still one has to move a head taking each steps slowly but carefully too. I loved reading each lines...Thanks for sharing....

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2014

Hope you both will walk like this to no end even as the curves and the boulders need not pose any threat but be like reminders of care to be taken ahead each time.

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Ken E Hall 29 June 2014

Yes walking on the road of life can be daunting and you explain the way so eloquently...yes we make mistakes but a smile will travel a mile...I want to spend and dance this poem is a helping hand Lyn...regards

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Hazel Durham 28 June 2014

I felt I was walking along the road too, with lovely rhythm and flow, life can change by taking a new road and with a good sense of humour we can withstand our mistakes! Beautiful write Lyn!

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Valerie Dohren 26 June 2014

Life is indeed a difficult road to follow, but as you say Lyn, laughter will ease the way. A good, philosophical write.

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Very simple yet powerful as it contains the truth..........Lyn..........very nicely composed..........I am impressed........

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Amitava Sur 25 June 2014

Very rightly you said, so long we are alive we cannot or shouldn't sit tight and inactive. We have to walk on and have to try to excel upon. Ultimately we have no control and don't know the destiny still we have to walk on for a greener day ahead.

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