Thursday, September 18, 2014

I Walk With Life Comments

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I walk with life
But the destination
Is my death.
There's death in life
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Neela Nath Das
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Akhtar Jawad 25 September 2014

The initial stop of life's train is death Like Dehradoon or Silliguri but from their another train carries us to Mussoorie or Darjeeling, to a beautiful hill station where there is beauty and nothing else.

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Chuy Amante 20 September 2014

Your body does dear one YOU do none of those things Separate!

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2014

we walk in life every day hoping for a better tomorrow always moving toward the end nice write

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Ramesh Rai 18 September 2014

A most realistic poem. Every one has to walk with life and death is home page.

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