. I Walk In The Sunshine Comments

Nice poem Adeline i really really really love it, you did great.

Beautiful and optimistic, keep writing!

I like the positivity in this poem

Hi Adeline! You asked me to look at this poem some time ago but I have been absent from this site but I have returned... and found this little gem of poem. This poem is like dancing the quickstep, quick, upbeat and set to keep you on the tip of your toes... leave them in your wake, leave them behind, they are history and your future is bright. New starts, new beginnings and it is 2013, hope that it is a good year for you :)

amazing thought mam.i like the way how your words flow like a melody which is simply incredible... thank you for sharing love, payal

An sad little poem in a way. The author clearly is interested in the person who lives in the night but if forced to make a choice because of personal principles or values. We all make these types of choices but there is always something sad about them at least to me.

I love this, nice pretty straight forward very positive