Thursday, February 18, 2016

I Walk In Pain Now Comments

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I walk in pain now
Each step hurts
The pleasure of walking is gone
One of the great pleasures of my life
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Shalom Freedman
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Ratnakar Mandlik 18 February 2016

Even if walking has become painful, it must be giving pleasure too. As some one has rightly said that, man has the capacity to get adjusted with any thing, one may forget pain while walking and derive pleasure.. A positive approach will also help in reducing pain and enhancing pleasure, hopefully. Thanks for sharing the thought provoking poem.10 points.

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