I smile till it starts to look fake
I laugh till my heart aches
I crave for my unfulfilled dreams
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So beautifully share! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++
Ever so heart touching and magnificently composed! .. Very inspiring and powerful! ..
An excellent poem. I am sure you will come back to this wonderful poetry platform in early 2023. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.
I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit I struggle to survive fate's defeat....commendable expression! A poem worthy of profuse admirations!
Absolutely a brilliant poem. You are writing so well. I wonder why don't you continue dear poetess Aarzoo? Keep writing! !
I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit.........I profusely admire, respect and love this bit of expression!
It's a superb write.. my great pleasure reading this wonderful poem time and again!
I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit I struggle to survive fate's defeat....brilliant expression! Well done! !
The title itself provides sufficient information about what the poetess intends to express in the text..Liked this beautiful poem!
I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time As the time marches with it's melodious chime.....loved this couplet.
I hold on to little sunshine that warms my heart As I look forward to life with a fresh new start.....great expression. A magnificent poem worthy of profuse admirations.
I find a great depth in your poetry! I wonder why don't you devote a little time for poetry everyday. You can grow by leaps and bounds. Please keep writing!
I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time----that is top notch writing displayed there, a deep thought so simply and elegantly expressed--- top marks on this poem
main tab tak muskraati rehti hoon jab tak meri asli muskaan nakli nahin bun jaati main tab tak hansti rehti hoon jab tak meri hansi mere dil ko dard nahin deti
This is a magnificent poem on hope that articulates positive mindset for the fresh tasks... I congratulate you for this beautiful poem of yours being displayed on board as POD!
Hope is essential and is expressed beautifully and profoundly in this poem! A wonderful piece!