Friday, June 17, 2016

I Walk Alone...! Comments

Rating: 4.6

I smile till it starts to look fake
I laugh till my heart aches

I crave for my unfulfilled dreams
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Timber Koleden 16 June 2025

Hope is essential and is expressed beautifully and profoundly in this poem! A wonderful piece!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 June 2025

So beautifully share! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 16 June 2025

Ever so heart touching and magnificently composed! .. Very inspiring and powerful! ..

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Anjandev Roy 20 January 2023

Such a great write......thanks for sharing...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2022

An excellent poem. I am sure you will come back to this wonderful poetry platform in early 2023. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit I struggle to survive fate's defeat....commendable expression! A poem worthy of profuse admirations!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 August 2022

Absolutely a brilliant poem. You are writing so well. I wonder why don't you continue dear poetess Aarzoo? Keep writing! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 July 2022

I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit.........I profusely admire, respect and love this bit of expression!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2022

It's a superb write.. my great pleasure reading this wonderful poem time and again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 April 2022

I hold my head high in-spite of life's deceit I struggle to survive fate's defeat....brilliant expression! Well done! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 April 2022

The title itself provides sufficient information about what the poetess intends to express in the text..Liked this beautiful poem!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2022

I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time As the time marches with it's melodious chime.....loved this couplet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 December 2021

A commendable piece of work! Liked

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 December 2021

I hold on to little sunshine that warms my heart As I look forward to life with a fresh new start.....great expression. A magnificent poem worthy of profuse admirations.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2021

I find a great depth in your poetry! I wonder why don't you devote a little time for poetry everyday. You can grow by leaps and bounds. Please keep writing!

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Susan Williams 30 December 2020

I try to drown my sadness in the cup of time----that is top notch writing displayed there, a deep thought so simply and elegantly expressed--- top marks on this poem

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Prem Nizar Hameed 27 July 2020

Well written with unswerving optimism, Arzoo.

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Ravi Kopra 08 July 2020

main tab tak muskraati rehti hoon jab tak meri asli muskaan nakli nahin bun jaati main tab tak hansti rehti hoon jab tak meri hansi mere dil ko dard nahin deti

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Anjandev Roy 07 July 2020

Such a precious write......thank u....anjandev roy.

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Rob Lamberton 22 March 2025

I agree, thank you!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 September 2018

This is a magnificent poem on hope that articulates positive mindset for the fresh tasks... I congratulate you for this beautiful poem of yours being displayed on board as POD!

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