I was like a withered flower in a barren desert,
till I breathed your smile that brought life to my heart.
I was like a homeless child looking for a shelter.
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It's a lovely and romantic poem with wonderful touching images, sounds like love at first sight. I hope the love they share lasts forever.
This is a beautiful poem! Love the way you write, and how it is depicted in a few word, but holds a strong message. Lovely! Keep writing on!
Greatest short romantic poem...truly i really loved this, you touch every beat in my heart, i know everyone will also feel the same_Soul
What a fascinatingly beautiful story of true love, pure and everlasting! Love defining itself through every poets vision - in every poem ever written. Your poem is the way to teach your children the way to true love, it is perfect! Your imagery is superb, Abdallah, so tender, gentle and soulful. This is now a favorite of mine, definitely a 10! Thank you for sharing! RoseAnn
a lovely poem...love is undefined....and its beauty is unparallel....nicely written...
A poem written from a heart in love...free...wonderful...
to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven. - - - - - - - - -Fathomless!
Great! ! always great write from u..humanity essence as always_Soul
Very beautiful! this was my favorite line, I wrote our story on the walls of my heart keep up the splendid work!
I especially liked this line, When I saw you, I felt my heart flying freely in the sky.
wow...perfectly written, i fall inlove in your every line...great art of poetry..keep it up
A poem with true feeling, nicely written.