Thursday, November 7, 2013

I Waited A Long Time For You, And My Dream Came True Comments

Rating: 4.6

I was like a withered flower in a barren desert,
till I breathed your smile that brought life to my heart.

I was like a homeless child looking for a shelter.
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Abdallah Gamal
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S H 06 May 2023

A poem with true feeling, nicely written.

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Chew Angelina 17 August 2015

This is a beautiful poem [3

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Darlene Walsh 14 August 2015

It's a lovely and romantic poem with wonderful touching images, sounds like love at first sight. I hope the love they share lasts forever.

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Sara Javed 13 August 2015

This is a beautiful poem! Love the way you write, and how it is depicted in a few word, but holds a strong message. Lovely! Keep writing on!

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Unwritten Soul 13 August 2015

Greatest short romantic poem...truly i really loved this, you touch every beat in my heart, i know everyone will also feel the same_Soul

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Little Opal 11 August 2015

I think it's beautiful!

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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

What a fascinatingly beautiful story of true love, pure and everlasting! Love defining itself through every poets vision - in every poem ever written. Your poem is the way to teach your children the way to true love, it is perfect! Your imagery is superb, Abdallah, so tender, gentle and soulful. This is now a favorite of mine, definitely a 10! Thank you for sharing! RoseAnn

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Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014

love is so undefined...beautifully expressed

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Nishi Kumari 31 December 2014

a lovely poem...love is undefined....and its beauty is unparallel....nicely written...

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 September 2014

A poem written from a heart in love...free...wonderful...

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Neela Nath Das 29 August 2014

to teach them what true love is, and let our souls rest in Heaven. - - - - - - - - -Fathomless!

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Unwritten Soul 29 August 2014

Great! ! always great write from u..humanity essence as always_Soul

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Words' Knight 10 March 2014

Fantastic poem, I love it.keep up the wonderful work.

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Lyndsay Thomas 25 February 2014

Very beautiful! this was my favorite line, I wrote our story on the walls of my heart keep up the splendid work!

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Bing Hua 18 February 2014

your poem is from your heart! It is very good.

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Crystal Rosser 21 January 2014

Nice. I have chills all over now. LOL!

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Patricia Saunders 08 January 2014

I especially liked this line, When I saw you, I felt my heart flying freely in the sky.

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Connie Tallada 26 December 2013

wow...perfectly written, i fall inlove in your every line...great art of poetry..keep it up

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Md Elias Uddin 23 December 2013

abdllah, go on dreaming and sharing

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Mary Amrutha 13 December 2013

GRT WRITE... REALLY GOOD AND KEEP THE GOOD WORK....

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