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This POLLUTION is Mrs JUDITH ELIZABETH BLATHERWICK AGED 54 old hag

such a nice poetry........10+ Best wishes for you.........

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

nice the last stanza- Perhaps i should be satisfied with gazes; for your lips are frozen, stitched and dead. ...... no soreness; no boring vest one drop of smiling or concerning tears on the dried way of coming in this night morning.......... till then waiting; till then waiting cause love is crawling! ! ! ! ! !

I really love this poem. it has a subtle simplicity to it - clear and vivid. nice one.

i loved this. for the shock element. exciting write, Melanie.

Some very nice imagry here - stark emotions and effective delivery. Well done