I Wail With Silent Cry Comments

Standing alone and no one by my side- a moment made invincible and timeless

Beautiful portryal of painful moemnts and tormented emotions... A great piece indeed... Keep it up Asif... Regards, Kamran

A amusing poem that touches heart. Especially, the last four lines are wonderful. Love it.10 added.

A wonderful poem. U get 10++

An enjoyable piece; I will e-mail you some private suggestions on how to possibly increase the strength of this poem. -Joe

Thanks for this piece. Drop first line and make it more poetic.You have poetic talent.Read and edit your postings repeatedly.

I like your poems a lot. This one portrays the pain and hope during loneliness in a splendid way.10 for this piece.

this is beautiful and deep. great write.

very very heartrending aijaz...really nice it feels as i with every piece you get more and more refined in your art...well done.

a write on sad feelings...good emotions there...poem expressive 10

that's so sad but i really loved it... it was just a beautiful piece that you've written here.. i love the imagery that i saw while reading this poem it was amazing ~Love Hazel

no u r not useless you r great! ! ! ! dont wail that silent cry we are with you. regards anjali +10 (read mine ALL I SEE IS YOU)

An excellent work of your Aijaz. the words comes from your heart and touches others heart. there is a sequence of hurts and pains that can be felt while reading them. pl don't be so sad and don't feel like that.

Very nice poem...very painful and touching

Sometimes silence is golden they say.

mr this beautiuful poems, full of criteria to the best

melancholy well expressed...the first stanza is little bit a debate of rationale.. however instrospective verses is well written... Ency Bearis

hmmm well the first line itself didnot appeal to me I was born as a useless being.....iam sorry coz i don't believe in that god sent everyone on some purpose....anyways...keep up the good work

In this kind of poem the emphasis should be more on reasons for crying than describing the cry and effects of it more. And nobody in this world is useless.But as usual u used a good language and very well expressed......

A poem expressing sadness. But a good one.