Friday, July 17, 2009

I Wail Not Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are not the only
in this wide miserable world, asif
there are many who die every death
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Asif Baloch
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I admire so much how you cast your own feelings aside in the first stanza to empathize with others. Wonderful images 'to gather all pieces those shattered, to beg with open palms and hopes are about to die'. The repetition of 'I walk not, just to cry' works so well to look beyond your own perfection. Excellent writing. 10 Karin Anderson

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