Thursday, September 28, 2006

I'Ve Spent A Lifetime Dancing Comments

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I've spent a lifetime dancing.
Entangled in a waltz,
From directions certain to false starts.
Romancing dreams!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ernestine Northover 29 September 2006

This is good Lawrence, a nicely thought out subject, which flowed well, and the words are lovely to read. A gentle poem moving in unison with God. A delight. Loved it. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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