Sunday, May 3, 2009

I ‘ve… Reach'd …somehow! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

24 minutes… more
To …MIDNIGHT
Here I'm....
Standing all alone
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wow, wow a surprising ending so touchingly written while she try to freeze the time just to reach to him and before the time she arrived saying iam dear here, , iam just touched by the warmth of this poem..wonderful story...10+++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 May 2009

I blushed…..shyly Staring deep Into his eyes… Whispered..gently I’m here now dear! ! ! .................... .yet unique poem of love intense, speckle of whisper ingrains on sands of resurrgence blue waits to decipher the code of midnight love, breeze when ruffles across glow breath slowly dislodge from head of lily luscious resilience.desire still inflames within to reach the moon ness on hill top, ..........wrought ingenious by thr breath taking imagery.yet a marvel by blazing glory of love,10+++++, thanks fopr sharing

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