Wednesday, July 2, 2014

I've Met A Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've met a girl
Louise her name.
Within I feel new strength unfurl
And I'm no more the same.
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Terry Dawson
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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 28 May 2018

Great artwork, Terry! Recipient me Of friendship's gift! 10+++

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Daniel Pace 05 September 2016

Simple, easy to relate to, and oozing with elegance! Truly a joy to read!

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Roseann Shawiak 11 May 2016

Beautiful and touching poem regarding a beginning relationship filled with pure and innocent love. You've painted a wonderful picture of it's essence in your poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Learnmore Edwin Zvada 11 January 2016

A well woven piece. Kudos!

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Heather Wilkins 23 November 2014

a nice write about a girl maned eozanne

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Achill Lad 06 October 2014

The magic of love, can change your outlook on life completely. A nice poem, Terry, written with emotion.

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Terry Dawson

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