Monday, July 16, 2012

I'Ve Made It This Far Comments

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At 20 years, ive been through a lot
At times i've had one bad day after the other
Some i remember as if it was yesterday, some i forgot
Life is no fairytale ive learned, facing our fears is what makes us stonger
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Ashley Dias
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S... Che 24 July 2012

nice poem... I enjoyed reading it :)

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Maged Habib 23 July 2012

You can focus more on the scale. Still good choice of vOcabulary

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Ashley Dias

Ashley Dias

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