Tuesday, April 23, 2013

I'Ve Had Enough Of Death Comments

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I’ve had enough of death
The gasp for air, the struggling breath;
Let those who kill, jailed, live on,
That they their breathing may reflect upon;
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David McLansky
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Brian Masters 23 April 2013

Very good, rhymes well and uses great vocabulary! Feel free to read some of mine, I think we have a similar style.

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