Monday, March 22, 2010

I’ve Got Everything Comments

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I’ve got the sunlight shining through my window.
I’ve got the wind with a hard blow.
I’ve got the rain, it overflows the river.
It gives me a glass of clear water.
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Jann Aquarius
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shakequill usher 22 March 2010

it's good, a bit too simple, but the ending overthrows the rest.

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