Thursday, June 17, 2010

I'Ve Fallen In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have fallen in love
with a girl—a very beautiful girl!
Her face is just like the moon;
her eyes shine like the stars.
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Anita Trivedi 01 July 2010

you have very wel discribed true love and attraction............ though leanghty but Beautiful poem

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Gan Chennai 30 June 2010

'Can you tell her all your truths, And have guts to bear hers too? And still if the loving feeling is left, then you can be hero' - My sincere advice - You should not reveal certain truths to your life partner till end. Never commit such a mistake of being too much outspoken and loose peace. It does not mean that you should hide all matters. Certain matters need not be blown too much, if you have an iota of doubt that it would come in the way of happiness and peace. We know that we are good, why rake up the past and loose peace?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 June 2010

‘Moving around in our fantasy land’ ~ Fantasy and fact are different…infatuation…jaundiced eye-vision ‘And spontaneously it happen’: …..love is not ‘made’ [except low passion body liking] right you’re happens….emotion blends and unites…love is giving [unidirectional] not with much expectation of getting…your slicings and discriminations are very aptly poemed…what True Love is still an enigma … thanks Sir sharing…enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Romeo Della Valle 23 June 2010

My dear friend, Love is Love by any given name...Love for a father or mother, a son or daughter, humanity, nature and of course, God1! Like a child fist learning to walk, trying to get up and falling and getting back up! C'est la vie, my dear friend, sooner or later we learn the proper way to stand on our own feet...Great write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace...

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Maureen Desmond 22 June 2010

Hello My name is Miss maureen am 24yr old. I saw your profile today and it really attract me a lot i believe that you are the man i have been looking for to share my love; How is your health? i hope all is well with you. I believe that we can move from here; but remember that distance; age and color dose not matter what matters is the true love and understanding; in my next e-mail i shall include my picture; i been waiting for your reply mail me with this mail address (maureendesmond2008@hotmail.com) for further introduction. Bye hoping to hear from you soon. p Ls contact me with this mail (maureendesmond2008@hotmail.com)

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Hans Vr 21 June 2010

This poem takes us from a wonderful description of being in love, the exstatic feelings when together but fear and uncertainty when being apart. And then the warm wisdom, contrasting IN love with love. Love is doing loving things, sharing convictions and joy and pain. You expressed it so wonderfully. Love is soothing, iN love is often causing the harsthest of stabbing pains.I think most of us have gone throught he exstatic feelings of baing in love, most of us have felt the pain of falling out of love and I hope most of us manage to find the real love, so nicely described in the second part of the poem. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Brandon Owens 19 June 2010

So then all love is the same? Between mother and child, husband and wife? To have no barriers of our ego, and to give ourselves with out selfish desire, is that love? Shouldn't we apply this to everyone in our life, so why then would he look for love somewhere else? He would need to first find it in himself.

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Omar Ibrahim 19 June 2010

most friendship is feigning, most loving mere folly wise and well penned thanks for sharing

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Sreekala Sukumaran 19 June 2010

So beautifully expressed the power of love its really great...well written...thanks for sharing..10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 June 2010

Love is not feelings, nor is it desire, But it is a will to act, real action like fire. Mother to baby, farmer to crop serve and help so that they grow while their egos entirely drop. final conculsion! ! this is not love. let me seek it eleswhere. so nice Rathi. again u bring in contrast.. to prove ur great point as usual. thank you for sharing.

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Andrew Bellon 19 June 2010

great meditation on the nature of romantic love. Dante places these glum lovers in the Inferno's first circle where they whirl in an eternal tornado. But he finds later in the Paradiso the supernal Love 'that moves the sun and the other stars.'

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Mathew Brady 19 June 2010

Every time, you strike a nerve! You have demystified the Love! I am wonder-struck how clearly and easily you explain that to with examples the mysterious concept of love.You are a great thinker-they way you started I never expected you will end the poem... It's beautiful heart that it timeless treads...LIVE LONG POET..WRITE MORE..ITS ENTHRALLING10++++++

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An altogether beautiful poem! O the power of love... enjoyed the read! ; D

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Pranab K Chakraborty 18 June 2010

Good realization. Long but well-written. Write more poet.....live long..... Regards, Apoet

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