Thursday, November 30, 2017

I've Fallen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shuddering rains of a deathless hate
Pierce our altars with doubting cold
So long to your frivolous fate
With halls of mourning, never to return again.
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Tyler Marshall
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

A 10++++++++++++++ for this beautiful poem on winter.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 April 2018

I would love to quote these lines I loved most. The world around me dies None will heed the lies And witness a child's cry I'm falling. An amazing poem from an emerging poet, so talented. These poems appeal your reader with a greater depth than those by Frost or Wordsworth. Love your imagination and great skill of choosing the right word. Subhas

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Tyler. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

While perception comes alike that world around you dies, this really provokes thought. This is an amazing poem very neatly and brilliantly penned...10

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