I've Been There Comments

Truly incredible poem that is also very relateable- easily 10+!

Let the seed of hope germinate within your heart that light may illuminate and dissipate all fear and hate Forgive, Forget, Repent, Move-on... and one day you too may say, " I know... I've been there! " ...great lines.

'Let the seed of hope germinate within your heart that light may illuminate and dissipate all fear and hate' Well said. A wonderful counseling your poem gives. Great work Luz. Rating 10/10

But as I inwardly grew and struggled to move forward the road along with my load became lighter and lighter 'til one day I realized that the shadows were far behind, like some thick mysterious, ominous foe. I read it a second time men must be shown their place like pillars still at homes

BEAUTIFUL poem May I now request you to read my MOMS SMILES PLEASE THANKS

my words of comfort may sound like foreign fairy tales making you feel that no one can understand. But I tell you, I understand, for I've been there! ... you are always there, of course, because you knew to be... a metaphysical and deep excitement of escape but also of being aloof... You write beautiful Luz... congratulations by dr. Riza

It has taken 5 years not to actually forgive but to understand reasoning behind so many things. Remembering one still does, though looked at with great wisdom. Each day has been a lesson, each day has flown. I now know there is nothing I can change. May your road see beauty.