Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, November 13, 2016

I've Been Away Too Long... Comments

Rating: 4.5

I'm sorry I've been gone so long
That's not the dog we had before
I realize that I was wrong
I can't be absent any more.
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Kim Barney
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Kevin Patrick 11 May 2019

You almost had me convinced this was slightly autobiographical, instead you just tell a good story, sorry that I have missed this!

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Tom Billsborough 17 November 2016

A very fine poem. Very poignant as Nosheen said. Think I'll stick it in my favourites' list.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 November 2016

Poignant but beautiful. A wonderful manifestation of love. Family life is important. Very beautifully expressed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

This is very wonderful poem on life facing changes day to day. There is grief and joy in life always. Having love for long time is nice.10

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Barry Middleton 13 November 2016

I would not go back if she paid me. But your poem is amusing. LOL

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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